Bella's Perspective
Eclipse is told in first person by the main character, Bella Swan. Bella Swan tells us about what happens to her, what she thinks and about her emotions. But it would be nice if we could know what Jacob and Edward are thinking and feeling. Also, I think it would be interesting to find out what Jacob, Edward, Edward's sister Alice, Charlie (Bella's dad) and other characters are doing when they're not with Bella.
Bella has an interesting perspective of the world, it is interesting because it is a world that I can relate to except that she see's it as she is nervously waiting to become a vampire and being scared of Victoria, who wants to kill her. Also, she see's the world as she if thinking about Edward and Jacob, wich would be normal. Thinking about your boyfriend and your best friend, except that one of them is a vampire and one of them is a werewolf.